Laws of Fizz-Hics by Stephen A. Dantes

Laws of fizz-hics

Lust speaks in words that hide confusion;

Ambiguous

Infatuation trusts the things that mean nothing but is everything;

Foolish

Love sees the invisible and yet completely misses the obvious;

Blind

Pleasure hides the tears that surface later through words not spoken;

Deceitful

Lie pretends to be the ever present escape in times of trouble although the intension is to appease the appalled;

Hypocritical

Fate borrows the promise of tomorrow and alters it outside of your control;

Ambitious

Destiny remains the only port of disembarkation when yesterday's choices fly today;

Truthful

Innocence aspires to being the only bridge between truth and lie;

Silent and Salient

Dream decides what a reality should be and could be;

Selfish

Truth, boasts that wisdom lies in the state there of;

Free

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SOME OF YOUR COMMENTS

Shamma Gabriel (May 27th 2010): I am absolutely star struck. That poem spoke to me in so many different ways that one cannot even imagine

Waynella Dantes (November 29th 2009): This piece really captured n held my interest.....Good job....

Shanya Evans (November 6th 2009): I love this one.. Inspires me to think.!!!

Petra Wallace (November 3rd 2009): this is beautiful keep up the good work

Mark Hennecart (November 1st 2009): Congrats on the release of another two good pieces. I can connect with "Laws of Fizz-hics".

The feelings it conjures up seems in context with two other great poems I read - Proverbs and Ecclesiastes.

While both describe the searches their authors had engaged to find the purpose of life, one is a discovery of the first ‘Principles of Life’ while the other alludes to the secondary ‘Elements of Life.

I trust that Laws of Fizz-hics will urge readers to dig deeper to that tertiary level where the ‘Aspects of Life’ can be uncovered.

Keep probing Bro.

Marie (October 31st 2009): I like the use of adjectives which seem to summarize each line, the way your subjects relate to love or pretty much built around one topic...you've given a lot of life to your subjects. I really love this poem!

rev Norbert Larcher (October 31st 2009): enjoyable reading which makes sense. Please continue Brother.

Rebecca Miller (October 31st 2009): I would rather you take your time and write an excellent poem instead. This is okay but it need to be reviewed and rewritten. Now Go back and rewrite!

Sancha (October 31st 2009): Nice work Stephen keep up da good work.

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